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在英语考试中,英语作文是尤为重要的一部分,赢得作文,就代表赢得了这场考试,下面就来看看大奔老师为大家整理的满分英语作文写作三大技巧。

一起认真学起来!

 

01  词汇高级,“语”众不同

高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠,为作文添彩,从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点:

1.不“人云亦云”原则

写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如:

①about→concerning/related to关于

(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)I'd like to share with you some details related to Chinese table manners.

我想和你分享一些与中国餐桌礼仪相关的细节。

②tell→inform 告诉

(2019·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)I'm writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match next month.

我写信告诉你我们下个月有一场排球赛。

③chance→opportunity 机会

(2019·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)If offered the opportunity to be a volunteer, I will do it well and live up to your expectations.

如果提供给我这个做志愿者的机会,我会努力做好以不辜负你的期望。

④master→have a good command/knowledge of 精通

(2019·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with visitors.

我精通英语,因此我很容易与游客交流。

⑤many→various 多种

(2019·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)There will be various fantastic performances given by talented students.

将有各种精彩的多才多艺的学生们演出。

2.短语优先原则

短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满,因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如:

①besides→in addition/what's more 而且

(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)In addition, you'd better bring some meaningful gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or some fresh fruit.

另外,你最好带点有意义的礼物,比如一束花或者新鲜的水果。

②consider→take ... into consideration/account 考虑

 (2019·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

如果您考虑我的申请我将不胜感激。

③many→a large number of 许多

(2018·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)There stands a big stadium in our school, where a large number of sports activities are held there.

在我们校园里矗立着一个大体育馆,很多体育活动在那里举行。

④remember→bear/keep in mind 记住

(2019·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Keep in mind that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet.

记住:你应该在训练中避免受伤并保持均衡的饮食。

⑤understand→have an understanding of 了解

(2018·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Those who want to have a better understanding of our school are welcome to enjoy a film called Growing Together.

欢迎想更好地了解我校的人欣赏《一起成长》这部影片。

⑥help/helpful→be of great help 很有帮助

(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)I sincerely hope my advice will be of great help to you.

我真诚地希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
 

02 句式生动,文采卓然

书面表达中的句子如果都是简单句一定得不了高分,精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句,让句子“靓”起来。

1.陈述不如倒装妙

倒装句是一种简单易行的使句子生动吸睛的句式。开头用否定词、地点状语、only+状语、so+形容词/副词+that、形容词+as+主语...

(2019·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)Following the speech is a one­hour lecture on the history of Chinese music.

演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。

2.强调省略很精彩

强调句可以突出强调某一部分内容,吸引读者的注意,而省略句可以使句子更简洁、明快。

(2019·天津高考)It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most.

就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。

(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Avoid making noises when chewing food.

咀嚼食物时避免出声。

3.主动不如被动巧

被动语态符合英语表达习惯,如在文章中利用两个被动语态的句子,会使整篇文章句式丰富。

(2019·北京高考)The importance of working with our own hands was stressed by our teacher.

我们的老师强调了用我们的双手劳动的重要性。

4.分词结构不可少

(2019·北京高考)Working on the farm, I realized how hard to work in the fields under the hot sun.

在农场工作, 我意识到在烈日下的地里耕作是多么艰难。

5.虚拟语气最委婉

虚拟语气在写作中的使用可以使表达更委婉,更吸引阅卷老师的注意力。

(2019·浙江高考)If it had not been for your assistance, I would not make such rapid progress.

要不是你的帮助, 我就不会取得如此快的进步。

6.各类从句添亮点

(2018·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)As you know, table tennis is a national ball in my country, so that you should know what my favorite sports is. (定语从句+状语从句+名词性从句)

正如你所知,乒乓球是中国的国球,因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。
 

03 过渡巧妙,完美文章

过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来,更像润滑剂,使文章衔接流畅。

1.文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语

to begin with(首先), first of all(第一,首先), in the first place(首先), as you know(如你所知), as is known to all(众所周知), as is shown in(正如在……显示的那样)

2.文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语

therefore/thus(因此), in conclusion(总之,最后), in brief(简言之), to sum up(总而言之), in a word(总之), generally speaking(总体上讲), >总的说来)

3.常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语

first(第一), second(第二), next(其次,然后), last but not least(最后但同样重要), after that(之后), eventually/finally(最后,最终), since then(从那以后), afterwards(以后,后来), meanwhile(同时), immediately(立刻)

强烈推荐以下组合

适用于两点的情况:on the one hand, on the other hand; for one thing, for another (thing)

适用于三点或以上的情况:to begin with, then, furthermore, finally; to start with, next, in addition, last but not least; most importantly, moreover/furthermore, finally

4.常用的表示因果关系的过渡词语

accordingly/consequently(因此,所以), for this reason(由于这个原因), as a result of(作为……的结果), in this way(这样), due to/thanks to(由于……), therefore/thus(因此), because of(由于)

5.常用的表示比较和对比的过渡词语

in contrast with/in comparison with (与……相比), similarly(同样), >相反), different from(不同), >另一方面)

6.常用的表示举例的过渡词语

a case in point(恰当的例子), that is to say(也就是说), for instance/example(例如)

7.常用的表示强调的过渡词语

furthermore/moreover(而且), besides(此外), actually/in fact(实际上), also(而且;也), indeed(的确), in particular(尤其,特别), naturally(当然), hopefully(有希望地)

 

 
按要求升级下面的考场作文

(2019·天津高考)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。

现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris 写一封电子邮件:

1.你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);

2.选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;

3.希望从中有何收获。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。

   

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. ①I learn you'll give us a lectureabout western art and want to hear our opinions about which topic to cover, so I feel an urge to make my voice heard.

②You know people have stressed the importance of studying traditional art in Chinese high schools. I'm interested in Chinese and Western art knowledge. ③I'm not only crazy about musical knowledge, but I particularly like traditional Jazz music. Can you do me a favor to talk about it?

I would rather you contrasted Jazz and Chinese folk music briefly. Waitingeagerly for your guidance.

Yours,

Li Jin

 

作文升档第一步 让词汇高级亮丽

利用高级词汇升级文中黑体词汇

1.about→concerning

2.particularly→in_particular

3.like→am_fond_of

4.eagerly→with_eagerness

 

作文升档第二步 让句式丰富多变

按要求升级句式并将黑体词汇替换为升级后的词汇

1.利用分词作状语升级句①

Learning you'll give us a lecture concerning western art and want to hear our opinions about which topic to cover, I feel an urge to make my voice heard.

2.利用非限制性定语从句+被动句升级句②

As  you  know, the  importance  of  studying  traditional  art  has  been stressed in  Chinese  high  schools.

3.利用倒装句升级句③

Not only am I crazy about musical knowledge, but I a  fond  of  traditional  Jazz  music  in  particular.

 

作文升档第三步 过渡衔接更巧妙

利用适当的过渡衔接词汇衔接升级作文并誊写

范文 

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Learning you'll give us a lecture concerning western art and want to hear our opinions about which topic to cover, I feel an urge to make my voice heard.

As you know, the importance of studying traditional art has been stressed in Chinese high schools. Accordingly, I am interested in Chinese and Western art knowledge. Meanwhile, not only am I crazy about musical knowledge, but I am fond of traditional Jazz music in particular. Can you do me a favor to talk about it? In conclusion, I would rather you contrasted Jazz and Chinese folk music briefly. Waiting with eagerness for your guidance.

Yours,

Li Jin


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